Dreamscape

The rails and chains can't hold me back,
It's your presence that I always lack. 
It's the one thing that made me feel stronger, 
The one thing that made me younger. 
Come back. 

I drifted on, and the people began to tie the string,  
What new things will this bond bring? 
The stairs to a new and better world beg for me,
The new things I can't wait to see. 
It waits for me. 

The dream is empty without you to continue,
The world is waiting for you, something new. 
I slowly climb the tower, looking for something, 
Just a whole, something, anything. 
Continue the path. 

The body becomes frayed and distorted as it moves along, 
No, it must continue, stay strong! 
The conscious mind will wander without a sound, 
Considering something further and beyond. 
Don't stop here. 

The beating and breathing of this being, destroyed by the world. 
Dizzying heights, the land becomes a huge mold, 
Of my imagination, it becomes one, 
And it cannot be defeated like glass and stone. 
It will forever prolong. 

The landscape is all just a huge dream. 
The unconscious thought, it will gleam, 
And glitter like a huge star, 
It will come closer from the far. 
Follow me. 

The chains no longer hold me down, 
I leap and go through without a sound. 
This body is strong from your resounding last word. 
Remember, the world will not be ruled by one lord.
You cannot win this time. 

The future is something much brighter, 
I learned, the weight I carried now lighter. 
You helped me learn from the insults, 
I'm better, and happy with my results. 
I'm better off than ever. 

This is much stronger than any glass,
It goes beyond any mass. 
The world scale is much greater,
But I won't compare, I'll be smarter. 
It is no better than any. 

The eyes misjudge this small dream,
Oh, how it would love to scream. 
It wants to let you know it is here,
The dream is not something mere. 
Be aware.
 
This is my world, and I never want to escape,
You cannot break it, my own Dreamscape. 
Exceed the distance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/10/2014 5:56:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Chiharu :) - I choose your first well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:20:00 PM
Chihaur , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/9/2014 4:57:00 PM
Chihaur, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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