Dreams That Will Not Fade

some people dream in black and white
but the grey dreamers have it right
examine the shade
you shall unearth hidden treasure
in which nothing else can measure 
dreams that will not fade

April 25, 2012
For CONTEST - Tail Rhyme Time - Black Eyed Susan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
Crisci Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Congratulations, Diana on your winning entry in Black Eyed Susan's contest. I love your introspection on dreams...and like me, you must dream in grey. I am happy to see your name in the winners' circle. Thanks for your kind comments. The new photo you have posted is lovely! Have a wonderful day. Hugs, Andrew.
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May 14, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Congratulations, Diana on your winning entry in Black Eyed Susan's contest. I love your introspection on dreams...and like me, you must dream in grey. I am happy to see your name in the winners' circle. Thanks for your kind comments. The new photo you have posted is lovely! Have a wonderful day. Hugs, Andrew.
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Congrats on your win. It has great flow and I enjoyed the read.
Taylor Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Diana-Marie. Awesome piece. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Squyres Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest !! The shades of greay is where we dwell most of the time...though many see it not.
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Very nice Tail Rhyme Diana.Congrats on your win.
Williams Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Diana-Marie congrats on your win..David
N  Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 6:26 AM
This is beautiful! We should all be willing to see life this way. Good luck with the contest
Kearley Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 8:54 PM
This reads like a wise tail...Very nice! :o)
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 8:48 PM
Very articulate, great poem.Winning wish's xoxoxo
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Nice job..welcome to Soup..good luck in the contest. Light & Love
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