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Dreams Seem So Real

Dreams seem so real The truth they conceal You're sure you're about to die There is no escape That's how you feel Wake up ~ in your bed you lie

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Date: 12/9/2019 3:42:00 AM
It's deeper than meets the eye. The dream is a riddle. The one who solves it will never fear death again. By the way, the poet gives a reader the key. It is an act of charity on the part of the poet)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 1:05:00 PM
You are right, provided the dream is deep. Mine tend to be so shallow, based solely on what is happening n my thoughts and/or life now. Thanks, Kurt. ~ Gershon
Date: 12/8/2019 2:17:00 AM
I have had these, and they are more real-feeling than real-life.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 1:03:00 PM
Indeed, those dreams are terrifyingly real. Thanks, Caren
Date: 12/8/2019 12:13:00 AM
It's always nice to wake up safe after a nightmare. Whew!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/8/2019 1:05:00 PM
So true...a great relief that the nightmare is not really there after all.
Date: 12/8/2019 12:02:00 AM
Die in your dreams and wake up in your bed.. Nice thoughts.. Beautifully penned..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/8/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish! :) gw

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