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Dreams On Carousel

From the carnival circle race goes off the course the vintage carousel of bobbing corralled horse, galloping skyward from the field of fiesta fair through the music of wind jingling everywhere. With teen fantasy on ornate steed out of chain, he holds the rein in the strands of ebon mane, canters up above the spire of the castle in the air, far from the meandering rivers on the land bare. In sprightly strides his reverie climbs the space high to the conclave of clouds caressing the satin sky. Returning after merrily going round the land of fairy, on the carousel of life all his dreams he’ll carry.
April 5, 2020 Contest : Carousel Picture Prompt Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Date: 4/7/2020 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal , with great imagery, rhyme and content. Thank you for entering my contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/7/2020 3:21:00 PM
i especially like the imagery and the alliteration of 'conclave of clouds caressing the satin sky'.Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2020 9:47:00 AM
Subimal, a big CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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