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Dreams of You

I return to sleep – where dreams live on and on thinking of a love that now is gone - and how in youth I’d felt blue until then. . into my dreams came YOU - a bright flame that ardently grew. But fires die. Can they renew? Sometimes! If I wake at early dawn, I return to sleep – where dreams live on and on. 7/19/2020 for 'STRAND completely new (12) any theme any form' Contest

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Date: 7/24/2020 12:45:00 AM
Wonderful writing in this poetic form you have created, Andrea. Congratulations for your win today, this is dreamy (literally!) ~ John
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Date: 7/23/2020 5:33:00 PM
This poem is dreamy.
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Date: 7/22/2020 7:57:00 AM
Reminds me of the 50's hit 'All i have to do is dream' Everly Bros, and why because i had it playing when i was reading this,,,,,,wonderful gem...
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Date: 7/22/2020 6:37:00 AM
Very nice dreams to dream of, Andrea :)
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Date: 7/21/2020 10:53:00 PM
Very beautiful in a spectacular form! I wish I could make a poem in this form,too...I am inspired dear Andrea. To my faves this goes..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2020 3:33:00 PM
thanks so much. I was inspired to do my third Andaree by Joseph's contest but needed something for one of Brian's many contests, so I used one of my old Andarees for Joseph!
Date: 7/21/2020 8:51:00 PM
Hope it comes back. Hugs...
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Date: 7/21/2020 8:30:00 PM
Wow! Beautiful!
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Date: 7/19/2020 9:30:00 PM
When you dream a great one, yes!
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:18:00 PM
This such a perfect example of your form. I want to thank you so much for the inspirational comment. It really wasn't easy for me. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:07:00 PM
Nicely woven, Andrea. You are the dream-weaver! Lovely! :) gw
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Date: 7/19/2020 6:44:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Andrea:-) I've tried your andaree poem once, I'll definitely try it again.
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Date: 7/19/2020 6:02:00 PM
I hope he likes this one Andrea. I love it! I want to try to write another poem in your form. It is more challenging that it looks on the surface. Romantic and nostalgic my friend. Lovely! xxoo
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