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Dreams of Yesterday

Stuffed in the attic Eyes clouded with cobwebs The old shoe dreams.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/7/2011 10:23:00 AM

Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Meg. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2009 2:11:00 PM

I have them too Margaret.. but forward to Nike's or Reebok's will now take their place.. great haiku from your gifted pen..enjoyed... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 10:46:00 AM

Love the metaphoric expressions of this Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2009 5:23:00 PM

I like! good imagery. I think Haikus are challenging and fun! Have a good weekend, Meg. Peace, Audrey

Date: 9/30/2009 1:14:00 PM

What an interesting perspective in this poem. Nice use of imagery. I like the title. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2009 9:34:00 AM

~~~Magnificent Meg~~~. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2009 7:50:00 AM

A lovely Haiku Margaret! Ah, what it must feel like to be the old shoe, smile. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Love Light Truth Patricia