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Dreams of Yesterday

Stuffed in the attic
 Eyes clouded with cobwebs 
The  old shoe dreams.

introspectionhaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 7, 2011 at 10:23 AM

Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Meg. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 16, 2009 at 2:11 PM

I have them too Margaret.. but forward to Nike's or Reebok's will now take their place.. great haiku from your gifted pen..enjoyed... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

November 5, 2009 at 10:46 AM

Love the metaphoric expressions of this Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Audrey Haick

October 9, 2009 at 5:23 PM

I like! good imagery. I think Haikus are challenging and fun! Have a good weekend, Meg. Peace, Audrey

September 30, 2009 at 1:14 PM

What an interesting perspective in this poem. Nice use of imagery. I like the title. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 30, 2009 at 9:34 AM

~~~Magnificent Meg~~~. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

P Sheart

September 30, 2009 at 7:50 AM

A lovely Haiku Margaret! Ah, what it must feel like to be the old shoe, smile. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Love Light Truth Patricia

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