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Dreams of Vicinity

Fireworks, Inside and out, Happy faces on streets, Hugging, Kissing, Playing, Dancing, in glee.. The little monster who jailed us, who dug graves of loved ones, The King of rift, Lay dead.
Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK J,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/3/2020 2:43:00 PM
spendid metaphors very timely, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/4/2020 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 5/2/2020 8:28:00 PM
Hopefully we will be out again soon with a firework's celebration. Stay well. Poetic hugs.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 11:52:00 PM
Yes..I'm waiting for that day..Stay safe also..
Date: 5/2/2020 4:22:00 AM
I liked this, it's an enjoyment to read. It brings back .memories of the past before we were on lock down. Soon enough we will back out
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 7:36:00 AM
Yes..We will be back soon to normal..Stay safe..
Date: 4/29/2020 3:35:00 PM
I see and hear the celebration--wonderful sentiments, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 12:45:00 AM
Yes Vijay.. The damage this minute creature created to humanity is immense.. Let us hope this will end soon.. Takecare..
Date: 4/29/2020 1:41:00 PM
How encouraging and uplifting Cinquain dearest, Jenish. I so much wish to see the day when your wonderful poem becomes reality but I am afraid we have to wait for some time for this to happen. Take care my friend. Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 12:43:00 AM
I also do.. They can't lock-down our hopes.. Let us hope for a bright sunrise soon.. Takecare..
Date: 4/29/2020 11:45:00 AM
There will certainly be a celebration. Enjoyed your hope full ink Jenish, xomo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 12:41:00 AM
Yes Maureen, eagerly waiting for the best.. Takecare..

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