Jenish Somadas Poet Cinquain

Dreams of Vicinity

Fireworks,
Inside and out,
Happy faces on streets,
Hugging, Kissing, Playing, Dancing,
in glee..
The little monster who jailed us,
who dug graves of loved ones,
The King of rift,
Lay dead.



Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK J,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2020 at 2:43 PM spendid metaphors very timely, Jenish. Jenish Somadas May 4, 2020 at 12:02 AM Thank you Andrea..

Juliet Ligon May 2, 2020 at 8:28 PM Hopefully we will be out again soon with a firework's celebration. Stay well. Poetic hugs. Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 11:52 PM Yes..I'm waiting for that day..Stay safe also..

Erica Berg May 2, 2020 at 4:22 AM I liked this, it's an enjoyment to read. It brings back .memories of the past before we were on lock down. Soon enough we will back out Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 7:36 AM Yes..We will be back soon to normal..Stay safe..

Vijay Pandit April 29, 2020 at 3:35 PM I see and hear the celebration--wonderful sentiments, Jenish. Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 12:45 AM Yes Vijay.. The damage this minute creature created to humanity is immense.. Let us hope this will end soon.. Takecare..

Demetrios Trifiatis April 29, 2020 at 1:41 PM How encouraging and uplifting Cinquain dearest, Jenish. I so much wish to see the day when your wonderful poem becomes reality but I am afraid we have to wait for some time for this to happen. Take care my friend. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 12:43 AM I also do.. They can't lock-down our hopes.. Let us hope for a bright sunrise soon.. Takecare..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 29, 2020 at 11:45 AM There will certainly be a celebration. Enjoyed your hope full ink Jenish, xomo Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 12:41 AM Yes Maureen, eagerly waiting for the best.. Takecare..