Dreams of Lewis Carroll

A spore is placed upon my tongue
Hallucinagenic seed
Images will soon appear
As mushroom starts to breed

The body starts to tingle
As the mind begins to glow
Spiders crawl about the wall
And carpet starts to grow

TV speaks in foreign words
And music can be seen
Am I just a form of life
Or am I human being

Chairs begin to talk to me
In words of ancient sage
I write them with a pen that is
Connected to the page

I'm mezmorized in disbelief
At all the world around
I'm seeing every little thing
And hearing every sound

I look into the mirror
And I see me looking back
Or could it be that that is me
And I am looking back

I place my hands upon my face
I pull them toward my chin
I move them over to my cheeks
To form a cheshire grin

I can bear to look no more
I turn and walk away
I seek the solace of my bed
And pray for light of day


Rockman   :-)

(For the Go Ask Alice contest by Debbie Guzzie)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/10/2011 5:38:00 PM
interesting Alice poem with rhytm and rhyme.....well written!
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:38:00 PM
I did add some to my dog doppelganger poem. I chose humor.
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:17:00 AM
I think you have captured Lewis Carroll's wildly creative spirit here, Rockman. Undoubtedly he had many dreams such as those you describe or he wouldn't have been able to write Alice in Wonderland. Best wishes in Deb's contest! Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:22:00 PM
Flashback Central bro! "Carpet Starts to grow"---Hell Yes it did!---The Solace of my bed--Nice! I think I need to tap into some old school memories and write some stuff down. I like this one. 7up and favorite. ~JSL
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:57:00 PM
You have a wonderful style and the imagination to go with it. I do enjoy reading your poems so much.
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:51:00 AM
Wonderful choice from the Alice in Wonderland, good luck, Rockman
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:10:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rockman. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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