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Dreams Collab

I'd like to boast
I saw a ghost,
a UFO
and Big Foot's toe.

I'd like to say
that yesterday
I called her name
and Nessie came.

written 25th March for Joanna's Collaborate with me contest

For children - aabb 4,4

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/10/2023 3:26:00 AM

You are certainly writing about what dreams are made and of course, dreams are by 95% fiction or impossible, although i have had three significant dreams in my lifetime interpreted by a friend of my mothers who did this as a pass time, but all mine came to fruition, one good, 3 very very sad. All the b3est for the contest. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2023 1:18:00 PM

Love this, nice and short.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/26/2023 8:57:00 AM

Dearest Jack, I adore the rhythm, rhyme and whimsy of your poem, just perfect for children.. and the inner child in us all! Can't wait to see the finished collab. Best wishes for the contest and warmest wishes for you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2023 11:09:00 AM

I had to go check out Joanna's contest before commenting on your entry, Jack. You did a great job in your usual smooth flowing natural style. I'm now tempted to have a go at this :) Regards and happy weekend my friend. // paul

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