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Thirteen beautiful lines

Constance La France sponsored

 

a serene lake on a moonlight night, as she paddles her canoe away, far into distance where it shines bright, in gentle breeze water lilies sway. her hopes are lit she would meet her dreams, that warmth and lips that such young hearts yearn, she scours in shadows between moon beams, a lost effort in daily sojourn. knock on the door brings her to morning, wiping the sadness of a lost hope, turning she smiles at her love snoring, she had with whom tied marital rope! dreams and hearts can be split in two parts. 9 syllables with abab rhyme sequence except the last line with a rhyme within.

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Date: 4/22/2025 10:10:00 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Great Ending... "Good luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day.........
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/22/2025 10:50:00 AM
Thank you dear Paula!! So nice to get your feedback. Always nice to hear from friend poets about our writes! Delighted!:)

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