Dreams

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DREAMS


DREAMS
Form in
My brain stem
Emotional
Sensory cortex
Translate my dream
To complex
Story
DREAMS



I
I am
Telling self
Examine me
Myself within
Check my issues
Fears worries
Psychic
DREAMS



DREAMS
........Vivid
....My view of
......Precognitive
Rapid eye movement
Brain most active
Your in my,
..in my
DREAM?

1/19/18

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2018 3:38:00 PM

Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest.. I enjoyed reading this creative work which reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2018 3:08:00 PM

A great entry for the contest James. I hope this does well. I would like to thank you for my first ever Trophy win in your haiku contest. I was delighted! : )

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 2/7/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank U Connie, your welcome... James

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2018 1:08:00 PM

Your dreams tell of your poetry, as does your poetry tell of your dreams. love the theme, the form, and your muse.

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 2/7/2018 1:52:00 PM

Harry, you're so right, write on... Dream on my friend...James.. :)