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I dream of you dreaming of me Hoping we can dream together In an astral rhapsody I fall asleep and take a magic carpet ride I decide to wait for you by milky way's dusty light You meet me here and gingerly nuzzle by my side In low tones we speak of how we've met in dreams before but were afraid to reveal how conscious minds were aware We mutually exhale our relief, and attempt to comprehend that the unfathomable power of our minds is beyond compare We journey to Venus and reflect beneath it's brilliant luster Then off to Saturn, to marvel at it's misty grey rings We gently spoon under our own planet's blue moon While the Earth pulls at our exposed heartstrings Saying goodnight, as we hover above Earth Spirits bathe in satiny moon beams Suspended animation, or so it seems A trance of romance, with the man of my dreams 5/7/16

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Date: 7/18/2016 10:15:00 AM
A real surreal dream, Dineen. Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
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Date: 7/17/2016 7:51:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write Dineen...Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:41:00 PM
Dineen, congratulations on your wonderful dreamin'' win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/26/2016 3:06:00 PM
Very romantic, beautifully done....
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 6/27/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Pashang, so nice of you to say so.
Date: 5/13/2016 8:55:00 PM
oh, that last part so romantic: a trance of romance, with the man of my dreams. A sweet rhyme.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/15/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and support Andrea, so appreciated.
Date: 5/10/2016 12:23:00 PM
Very sweetly penned your beautiful dream. A sweet 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/13/2016 11:36:00 AM
And how sweet of you to say, thank you BL, appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
Very descriptive poem Dineen. Love the Space travel theme. Regards, Craig
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/8/2016 6:02:00 AM
Thank you for telling me what you loved about this piece, appreciated.

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