Dreams

I dream of you 
dreaming of me
Hoping we can dream together
In an astral rhapsody

I fall asleep
and take a magic carpet ride
I decide to wait for you by milky way's dusty light
You meet me here and gingerly nuzzle by my side

In low tones we speak of how we've met in dreams before
but were afraid to reveal how conscious minds were aware
We mutually exhale our relief, and attempt to comprehend
that the unfathomable power of our minds is beyond compare

We journey to Venus and reflect beneath it's brilliant luster
Then off to Saturn, to marvel at it's misty grey rings
We gently spoon under our own planet's blue moon
While the Earth pulls at our exposed heartstrings

Saying goodnight, as we hover above Earth
Spirits bathe in satiny moon beams
Suspended animation, or so it seems
A trance of romance, with the man of my dreams



5/7/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Misra Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:15 AM
A real surreal dream, Dineen. Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
May Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Beautiful romantic write Dineen...Congrats on a fine win
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Dineen, congratulations on your wonderful dreamin'' win. LUV **SKAT**
Salehi Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Very romantic, beautifully done....
Williams Gault Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Pashang, so nice of you to say so.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:55 PM
oh, that last part so romantic: a trance of romance, with the man of my dreams. A sweet rhyme.
Williams Gault Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thank you for your comment and support Andrea, so appreciated.
Devnath  Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Very sweetly penned your beautiful dream. A sweet 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Williams Gault Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:36 AM
And how sweet of you to say, thank you BL, appreciated.
Emu Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Very descriptive poem Dineen. Love the Space travel theme. Regards, Craig
Williams Gault Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Thank you for telling me what you loved about this piece, appreciated.
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