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Dreams

A little girl, Who tried to stand tall. She was confused, So she wanted it all. Deep inside, Something had broken. Causing her to shatter, Causing her to weaken. The smile that shone, Was her way of lying. It made people happy, But inside she was dying. This realm, Was not hers to love. She wished to be elsewhere, Somewhere up above. She cried good bye, Her eyes, Reflecting sunbeams. She was being called, Called to the land of dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:11:00 PM
Tanisha, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:43:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this weak
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Date: 8/27/2013 1:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. ...really enjoyed reading your poem...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 8/27/2013 5:22:00 AM
good morning Tanisha, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/27/2013 3:53:00 AM
Hi Tanisha Lovely poem with a very nice rhyming rhythm. I love the way poetry allows us to purge our minds. Looking forward to reading more. Sandra
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Date: 8/27/2013 3:50:00 AM
WONDERFUL PIECE... I HAVE ON THIS TOPIC TOO HAVE LOOK. THERE IS A SPECIALL FEEL TO YOUR POEMS
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Date: 8/27/2013 3:43:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Tanishal ! - Nice to read your first poem here.- A lovely poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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