Dreams

All tho my thoughts have crashed on shore; My dreams will roam for evermore. I dream of things that come at night; That like to give you all a fright. They wait in dreams and know the truth; They know that you think it is a spoof. They come at night because of this; They want to give you an acid kiss. There minds are sharp there very dark; They know your moves there very smart. I warn you this because its true; I know just what they want to do. They live only in the dreams; They enjoy making you scream. I awake on lonley shore; Theyll live on for evermore.

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Floatingpoet Captainmike

Date: 3/29/2011 5:14:00 AM

hey there buddy Captain mike came over taz check you out. I like your dreams. I have had so many in my life and I'm still waiting for one to come true. this one sounds like it's a nite-mare but very well writin. I'm glad to be your friend and look forward to your next poem. peace and love from Capt. Mike ps I gives it a 7 but it's really a ten!

Dana Smith

Date: 3/26/2011 3:47:00 PM

This is my first time visiting your poetry and I'm really glad I did, I've been going through a rough time lately and the poets writing on here is the only thing really keeping my spirits high anymore... I was wondering if you could look at my latest poem and maybe give me some advice.. I need all the advice I can get...

Emma Mantle

Date: 3/22/2011 11:26:00 AM

An interesting write, gave me a chill. Maybe i won't be going to sleep tonight!! Well done, thanks for stopping by my work best wishes Em :)

Jezabella Singe

Date: 3/22/2011 11:24:00 AM

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 2:37:00 PM

very unique write my friend... dreams are the realty of another life...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2011 1:47:00 PM

Scary...Sara