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For "Let's Minichu on Dreams" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

It’s important to sleep. To enhance health and creativity is why I go deep! Let me dream. . . please! When more relaxed, I multiply my Z’s. It seems I’m enthralled by dreams. It’s important to sleep. When more relaxed, I multiply dreams!

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Date: 11/13/2023 10:48:00 AM
A creative write. We need our sleep. Good Luck...  Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2023 1:23:00 PM
Thanks. I will be fine today if Ford finally fixes my Mustang's camera for backing up.
Date: 11/13/2023 6:49:00 AM
My dreams are usually rather sucky. But I do love a good 8-9 hour snooze.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2023 10:14:00 AM
really? Are they nightmares? I even like the few nightmares I have since they are exciting. My dreams are in color and cool. When one finishes, I wake up, as if it had been a movie. Then I usually have to take my sleeping pills to get back to sleep. Even with large dose of temazapan, I am lucky to get even 7 hours. Normal for me, without pills, is only 4 hours of sleep. I can live that way, but I enjoy sleep, so I got the pills to fight my insomnia.
Date: 11/13/2023 1:49:00 AM
How lucky you are to have such dreams. I only have nightmares. Blessings
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2023 10:17:00 AM
well that's just tragic. Sorry, Victor.
Date: 11/12/2023 11:29:00 PM
You did this really well..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thanks, S.O.
Date: 11/12/2023 1:53:00 PM
Its important to sleep really, but theres so many that struggle to sleep, sleep is a battle they fight to win, to dream sweet ones. Your last lines they flow so well together. Ive been thinking of trying this too: you really are a natural with these forms sweet andrea, Goodluck for the contest
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/12/2023 1:59:00 PM
I wish I were better with free verse but I mostly do well with forms. You are right about sleep struggles . Without my pills, I have insomnia
Date: 11/12/2023 12:44:00 PM
An intriguing piece, Andrea! I love these poems.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/12/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thank you

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