Dreams

It’s important to sleep.
To enhance health and creativity is why
I go deep!

Let me dream. . . please!
When more relaxed, I multiply
my Z’s.

It seems
I’m enthralled by
dreams.

It’s important to sleep.
When more relaxed, I multiply
dreams!

dreamrhyme

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Paula Goldsmith

November 13, 2023 at 10:48 AM

A creative write. We need our sleep. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2023 at 1:23 PM

Thanks. I will be fine today if Ford finally fixes my Mustang's camera for backing up.

Victor Buhagiar

November 13, 2023 at 1:49 AM

How lucky you are to have such dreams. I only have nightmares. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2023 at 10:17 AM

well that's just tragic. Sorry, Victor.

Silent One

November 12, 2023 at 11:29 PM

You did this really well..

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2023 at 10:17 AM

Thanks, S.O.

Ink Empress

November 12, 2023 at 1:53 PM

Its important to sleep really, but theres so many that struggle to sleep, sleep is a battle they fight to win, to dream sweet ones. Your last lines they flow so well together. Ive been thinking of trying this too: you really are a natural with these forms sweet andrea, Goodluck for the contest

Andrea Dietrich

November 12, 2023 at 1:59 PM

I wish I were better with free verse but I mostly do well with forms. You are right about sleep struggles . Without my pills, I have insomnia