Dreams

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In the midst of midnight croon, twilight approving stars swoon at the waning crescent moon. A wee child climbs the ladder of hope, courage, and dreams that matter. A wyle smile gush from within, their eyes melt reaching to win the light above not giving in. 4/27/2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2019 12:22:00 AM

Oh, wow, this is adorable, and the photograph is darling! You are showing such a pretty side of yourself, and I had thought we had already glimpsed it, but I was wrong, Eve. Here it is in full glory!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2019 4:29:00 PM

oh how charming is this Eve!:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/28/2019 9:05:00 AM

Lovely, and that last line, tucked in, like with a lullaby. xomo