Dreams

Dreadful dreams pain me as I sleep, Draining me of all cheerful hope, Deadly monsters will always creep, Daily fears do not help one cope, Destroying coy me dream by dream, Desperate to wake up I scream, Delighted saved from alarms beep. June 17, 2018 Pleiades Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May 1st Place

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 8:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/25/2018 10:28:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Roy Pett

Date: 6/24/2018 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Haley, great Pleiades well written. :))

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/24/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much. I wasn't aware of this poetry form so it was very interesting and fun to write.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/23/2018 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Haley :)

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/23/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Thanks for being so encouraging since I just joined this site. It made me feel like I should try and enter contests. Thank you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/22/2018 7:54:00 PM

EXCELLENT, Haley! CONGRATS! Janice

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/22/2018 9:09:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 4:24:00 PM

oh my, THAT's no fun. I have dreams in which I am associated with strange people, even serial killers but my dreams are interesting and rarely nightmarish! Thankfully so!!! Congrats on your win.

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/22/2018 9:08:00 PM

Thank you. Yes some dreams are more enjoyable then others. Thankfully most are good ones.

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2018 4:21:00 PM

Saved by the alarm clock!...Congrats on your win Haley

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/22/2018 9:06:00 PM

Thank you. I really enjoyed this contest. I learned about a new poetry form and enjoyed the creative challenge. Thanks for a great contest to allow me to learn and grow.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2018 1:20:00 PM

Well written. I can relate to this Haley. Good luck in the contest :)

Haley Fisher
Date: 6/17/2018 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Heidi! I appreciate it!