Dreamless Night

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" NIGHTFALL " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of nature, sky, twilight and body of water

The painful night fell Tears dripped on the pillow- Scared dreams run away! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 April 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2021 6:47:00 PM

You penned a vibrating Haiku, weeping pillow and great picture Blessings and Regards

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/27/2021 5:28:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend, Lasaad! Blessings

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2021 6:04:00 AM

Well done, Haiku--awesome photo!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/25/2021 10:48:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, My dearest friend, Vijay! God bless you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/25/2021 4:58:00 AM

Having had nightmares as a boy I couldn't wait for daylight to come. Even now as an adult waking from a disturbing dream leaves you feeling spooked. So now definitely no cheese before bed lol. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/25/2021 10:43:00 AM

I have to follow your advice, my friend, Tom: No cheese ...hahaha! Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Blessings.