Dreamland

Dreamland; a place of no boundaries. A place of several consequences, most in the light of morning. Sleepless escape, not from reality. The meaning unclear, the importance not. My mind is... absent. Void of liability, full of opportunity. Depths of night pass in mere seconds. There is my mother. Standing on grass, cracked and dehydrated. There for me. Blood in her ear, this is not real. Awaken relieved, albeit lonely. My mind still attached to the night, even in the sunrise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 26, 2015 at 6:27 AM
I think this has the ingredients of a good poem but somehow for me it is not quite there yet. It lacks the dreamy floaty quality. I don't know if I am making any sense??? I hope so.
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