Dreamland

His hand on my hip
His eyes locked with mine, Heaven
And then I wake up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Awww, sad last line; when matter turns into the state of idea everything is so light....jojojojo nice haiku, I hope next time solid states and continuation of daily stuff don't interrupt the idea wiii thanks for sharing!!
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 6:34 PM
Darn! Wish dreams like these could come true, Jen. So much conveyed in just three lines. Hats off to you! Love, Carolyn
Leccese Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 6:23 PM
Simple and sweet. I like it. Nice job! Nate
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