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Dreamland

His hand on my hip His eyes locked with mine, Heaven And then I wake up

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 12:56:00 PM
Awww, sad last line; when matter turns into the state of idea everything is so light....jojojojo nice haiku, I hope next time solid states and continuation of daily stuff don't interrupt the idea wiii thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:34:00 PM
Darn! Wish dreams like these could come true, Jen. So much conveyed in just three lines. Hats off to you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:23:00 PM
Simple and sweet. I like it. Nice job! Nate
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