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Dreaming Scream

We can create brilliant worlds with God's help. Success hinges on denying a faint yelp. We can exert greater focus than we realize. So pray and beg God to spare you from vile lies. Since I was a little kid, I've always had dreams. In a dream, someone jumps up and screams. I favored fellow humans' needs over my own. Lacking core beams, Lord, let our faith atone. Failure is inevitable, yet most failures don't kill. Focusing on past mistakes may avail you to excel, still. To stay ahead of others and reach goals, be firm. Don't trail the flock; allow your feelings to squirm. All draw into me for they share my similarity. All who agnize me hope I reach my goal with clarity. My ideas alter people's lives, and they're positive. Each is upbeat and has my heart for being creative.
Written: June 1st, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 1:09 PM
A true mentor leads by example. Positive vibes begets positivity in others. Proclaiming negativity and fear mongering only creates fear in others. To be admired are those who learn from their mistakes and lead with certainty. A truly thoughtful poem.
Messina Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Positive vibes, Lasaad. Excellent entry for the contest! "We can create brilliant worlds with God's help" Absolutely! Wishing you all the best. Charlie
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Upbeat and inspiring words, my friend. Endearing vibes emanate from every stanza.
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:08 PM
This is such a nice and positive poem. Is it for the Dreaming contest?
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 12:46 PM
- We are only human and mistakes are inevitable, but we learn from our mistakes... a lovely poem, Las :) - hugs
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