Dreaming Is Like Seeing the Things You Want With Your Eyes Open

When I wake from my slumber I want you to be the first sight I see,
Being like the sun in the sky; because you’ll always be right above me,
And I, all the star high up in the night sky, I’ll watch you during the night of course,
but in the morning I’d disappear, yet still keeping a close over view,
you are the only girl to find most of the missing pieces of my heart, and the ones you
couldn’t find you filled in with yours but before sowing everything together you embedded
a four letter word inside the pieces of the heart that you were about to give me, 
Now honestly the four letter word isn’t just a word, but a way of life that I want to live
with you, the way you made me realize that my life is perfect, but it’s only because
you’re my better half, I don’t want to think were I’d be if I didn’t meet you but I don’t
have to because I met you, and I have you, 
You still being the sunshine through the darkest of days and showing me the path to where
you’d be, 
You’re so soft and kind hearted, sweet and beautiful, amazing and one of a kind, when you
saw me broken and thrown on  the side of the road, and you not being like everyone else
picked me up and kept me even though there was some assemble required, you built be from
scratch, and not in someone else’s image, but in my own, and after you saw me fully fixed
yet still missing some pieces you love me like no other, and kept me even though you had
miles of guys to choose from,
You and me hand in hand, we lived every day like it was our last, you talked about wanting
to grow old together and the idea was perfect, because you’re so amazing, 
Then I really woke up, and tragically you were nowhere to be found…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/1/2011 5:59:00 PM
sorry did have my computer and thank you the sad part is this happens to me alot
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Date: 1/1/2011 5:59:00 PM
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mark. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2010 12:29:00 AM
Good write! Sorry about the illusion.
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