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Dreaming Forever

Lying here feeling our breath together Do you think we could live in this moment forever? Feeling your heartbeat, sweetly dreaming Tears down my cheek, gently streaming Closing my eyes, all I see is you Were you ever here, is it really true? My visions elude my mind’s eye Still I close my eyes and try My hand stretched out, my heart forever beating You’re just out of reach, feeling your soul retreating Hope hangs on, then fades to gray Illusions resurface as I begin to pray Please come back, my life is so lost I need you here, but at what cost? So now I close my eyes again And face reality as this dream comes to an end….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/8/2012 1:16:00 AM
loved the title and the poem itself is very deep, really relate to it. wonderful piece
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:51:00 PM
So much emotion in this write of yours Jodie. Enjoyed this. ;)
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:44:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup and enjoyed reading your works today!! stop by and check out my poems if you can stand the eccentric works.
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:19:00 AM
Wow, this poem is filled with emotion ! Great write...keep the pen strok'n that slip ! james
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