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dreaming daughter

dreaming daughter ascends starlit harbor.... to her father's biding love he is as she remembered....jovial in the way he was on earth they embrace in the twilight....stars fill their tearful moonlight eyes navy dad once....now on god's deployment awaits final reunion

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Date: 6/5/2025 8:17:00 PM
'now on God's deployment' -- such a memorable line, Regina. Cheers amidst the tears, Gershon
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Regina Elliott
Date: 6/8/2025 11:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon. My late husband and my daughter had a strong bond. So sad he's gone, but someday we'll see him again. Shalom to you and your family. ~

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