Dreaming

I dreamed I was within your dream
You awoke and I did not, so it would seem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 27, 2016 at 11:14 PM
David, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
Scars Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 9:14 AM
David, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest...:)-luloo
Onclaud Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:38 PM
sensitive portrayal of being one with another from the soul level.. dream on; splendid job,david.. huggs
Mohn Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Thank you so much Nette for the thoughtful comments :)
Callus Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Oh! lovely couplet! Wonder what became of your dream!! cu // paul
Mohn Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Paul, not as "well rounded" as yours, but an effort none the less :)
Merrill Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Hey, I like this...clever write, Dave. Peace :-)
Mohn Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Mel...very much appreciated
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