Michael J. Falotico Poet Acrostic

Dreaming

by Michael J Falotico


                                      Dreaming is the best feeling.
                                      Running through scenes that keep you still.
                                      Ending up confused to what was real or not.
                                      Always coming back to you in bits and pieces.
                                      Mountains of reality that forms the unclear.
                                      Into a day where reminders peck at your thoughts.
                                      No other way to dream in a day saved for the night.
                                      Going to doze off for a bit to play in another world.

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Poet Destroyer A April 30, 2011 at 9:55 PM humm, yes when i was young I would dream of a world,, and my dream guy.. now that i'm older... reality woke me up and i realize that my dream guy will only exsist in dreams. so now i decided to move on to dream of books and shoes... lol... I dream of shoes and books... thats the only thing i recall in a dream books and shoes... no mountains,, no dimensions... no guys... well evil yes,, opps.. well i've spoken too much,,, enjoyed your topic..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 30, 2011 at 6:03 AM Perfect description and depiction of dreaming Michael.. been doing that a lot lately myself.. the subconscious mind comes out to play when we dream..luv.. creativly beautiful and expressive.. luv.. my W.K. has fulfilled my dreams with this piece ..your Jersey Girl in dream mode...forever with luv..

Wilma Neels April 30, 2011 at 5:13 AM Michael can I join you in another world? Love the way you depict dreaming in this piece of yours!! ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick April 29, 2011 at 4:53 PM That other world can be perfect..I hope that you enjoyed being there..Thanks for stopping by..Sara