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Dreaming

I was like living in the desert who dreamed for raindrops, but only sandstorms came-- who dreamed for gerberas too, but only cactus plants I'd seen-- stinging in my sagging skin.

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Date: 9/19/2020 9:57:00 AM
Loved your description because ii creates a emotion of desolation. Well done. ~~
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Date: 9/19/2020 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for commenting. Highly appreciated.Somebody told me that sadness/ loneliness is really an art. It is indeed!

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