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Dreamer's World

If blackened skies were white at night And whitened clouds were blue and bright It's dreamer's world If drips of rain were soft and dry And you and I could learn to fly It's dreamer's world If cold was warm and hot was cool And mermaids swam in our swimming pool It's dreamer's world If sad was happy and pain felt good And nays were yea's and wouldn't would It's dreamer's world If war were peace and hate was love And hell was heaven way high above It's dreamer's world

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Date: 4/1/2019 11:01:00 AM
Hi Charles, this poem sounds very much like the one i posted over the weekend - my muddled mind - very enjoyable thank you Charles. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/24/2019 5:05:00 AM
A dream very well expressed, Charles, very warm and emotive.
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Date: 3/22/2019 9:43:00 PM
Such an interesting and quirky poem, Charles!
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Date: 3/22/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Charles, it would be a dreamer's world. Have a nice evening mh friend.
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Date: 3/22/2019 3:39:00 PM
ohh, a good poetic grasp of what dreams are made, charles!... huggs
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Date: 3/22/2019 3:02:00 PM
I appreciate your dream and lean toward it as well.
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Date: 3/22/2019 1:13:00 PM
You da man, Charles...but keep on dreaming...'Dream on Dream on...dream until your dreams come true'...great verse, my friend...now I feel like taking a nap lol...love & light...^WW^
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