Dreamer

To sleep is to dream As salt water is to tears Awake with LENORE

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/8/2012 7:00:00 PM

"To sleep perchance to dream--Aye there's the rub! " I am in love with your haikus. You should do more of these. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:25:00 PM

wow, very interesting how ou ended this one!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/7/2010 11:26:00 PM

enjoyed the title. enough of your emotion said in so little words. hope all is all right with you in your life at the moment.love you always; -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

Abe Lopez

Date: 1/12/2009 4:35:00 PM

True emotion is this haiku HG.............Nice

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/11/2009 9:28:00 AM

good job that was good hgarvey................danielle

John Rhinem

Date: 1/3/2009 7:03:00 PM

Sonadora~"Dreamer"~"Hello My Beautiful Brother HG Whom I Sincerely & Deeply Love~Happy New Year To You & All Your Loves!"~I'm going to have to get back to You about that question from destiny? But the love that you have for "Your Wife," is one of the most beautifully rare loves that my life has ever known!!! And that is a commendable wonderful thing~and believe me HG~"Your Love Does Not Go Unnoticed By Heavens Watching Eyes!"~My Love Always To You & Your Loves, John!:)

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/2/2009 4:37:00 PM

Your undying love is felt through this haiku. Great work...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/2/2009 6:33:00 AM

Your love remains constant and strong and will endure forever, as there is no doubt in my mind your Lenore carries this same love. Always beautiful, and sad, to read of your love. Love, Shar

Date: 1/1/2009 8:55:00 PM

Love runs deep for you. Consider it a blessing to care so much. Though it can be painful, you have been given true love which some people never attain. The title works well with the poem. My thoughts and prayers go with you. Karen