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Dreamed Connection

I was writing notes to be found when you were writing albums By whatever force there is in the universe, your pen was faster I couldn’t let my ears decay when I needed them to hear you That sounds so small, but it was a baby step off a tall cliff Sweetie, do you have a sliver of hope I could borrow? I’ll leave it on your honey-do list to pick up my integrity

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Date: 10/9/2019 11:16:00 AM
Julia, Good poem. I like the casualness of it and the girth of it - it has a lot of dimension from a note to a universe to a baby to a cliff. Great thought tennis! Love the sliver of hope idea - quirky but tragic. It also points out a disconnect in the relationship that is mutual - cleverly expressed. Well done.
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Julia Froehlich
Date: 10/9/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Peter. I often find my brain playing tennis and I'm glad I wrote this one down.
Date: 10/6/2019 6:04:00 PM
That is such a lovely poem. i enjoyed it.
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Julia Froehlich
Date: 10/9/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene!

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