Howard Kerr Poet Verse

Dream World Carrier

Lost
in a mesmerising blue and emerald haze I grasp at oyster clad sea waves,
a clueless swimmer‘s quest for shifting sand dune castles my mirage speckled eye has
found  


Lost is first line word 
Found is fourth line word
Lines 2 and 3 have 20 syllables each.


Date of Poetry Soup
Entry Monday April 12 2020

Let The Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest

Sponsor Jenish Somadas

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Jc Hawkens April 18, 2020 at 7:05 AM 'Tis a beautiful description you have here. I love the imagery. Congrats. Howard Kerr April 18, 2020 at 9:28 AM I wish to thank you for reading this competition entry and your insights on my work. I’m so pleased you loved imagery. Howard

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 5:37 PM you did splendidly in this contest, Howard. Truly, this is so descriptive! Congrats. Howard Kerr April 16, 2020 at 7:18 PM Hi Andrea, First of all congratulations on your success with an inspirational work. I was impressed by its beauty. Thanks for your generous words and for including me in your schedule. Howard

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 15, 2020 at 11:22 PM A splendid poem, which I very much enjoyed, Howard. Congratulations on your win. Howard Kerr April 16, 2020 at 1:47 AM Your kind words motivate me to higher things, Evelyn. They are appreciated by me. Regards Howard

Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2020 at 2:23 PM I can imagine this oyster clad sea, rich in color! Howard Kerr April 15, 2020 at 2:33 PM Thanks for your comment and for reading my entry

Jenish Somadas April 15, 2020 at 1:29 PM Wonderful imagery in your verse.. mesmerized.. Great win Howard.. Howard Kerr April 15, 2020 at 1:59 PM I am both honoured, flattered and quite simply overjoyed, Jenish. This is one of my favourite pieces. I would like to thank you for reading this poem, and of course the prize which means so much to me. Howard