Dream World Carrier

Lost
in a mesmerising blue and emerald haze I grasp at oyster clad sea waves,
a clueless swimmer‘s quest for shifting sand dune castles my mirage speckled eye has
found  


Lost is first line word 
Found is fourth line word
Lines 2 and 3 have 20 syllables each.


Date of Poetry Soup
Entry Monday April 12 2020

Let The Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest

Sponsor Jenish Somadas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/18/2020 7:05:00 AM
'Tis a beautiful description you have here. I love the imagery. Congrats.
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Howard Kerr
Date: 4/18/2020 9:28:00 AM
I wish to thank you for reading this competition entry and your insights on my work. I’m so pleased you loved imagery. Howard
Date: 4/16/2020 5:37:00 PM
you did splendidly in this contest, Howard. Truly, this is so descriptive! Congrats.
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Howard Kerr
Date: 4/16/2020 7:18:00 PM
Hi Andrea, First of all congratulations on your success with an inspirational work. I was impressed by its beauty. Thanks for your generous words and for including me in your schedule. Howard
Date: 4/15/2020 11:22:00 PM
A splendid poem, which I very much enjoyed, Howard. Congratulations on your win.
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Howard Kerr
Date: 4/16/2020 1:47:00 AM
Your kind words motivate me to higher things, Evelyn. They are appreciated by me. Regards Howard
Date: 4/15/2020 2:23:00 PM
I can imagine this oyster clad sea, rich in color!
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Howard Kerr
Date: 4/15/2020 2:33:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and for reading my entry
Date: 4/15/2020 1:29:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your verse.. mesmerized.. Great win Howard..
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Date: 4/15/2020 1:59:00 PM
I am both honoured, flattered and quite simply overjoyed, Jenish. This is one of my favourite pieces. I would like to thank you for reading this poem, and of course the prize which means so much to me. Howard
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