Dream World

purple sky above
fits my dreams like a glove
the blue grass blowing
from the windy day
like the twister in my head
swirling around thoughts of dread
as they take my innocence away
my dream world becomes a nightmare
purple skies turn to gray
i shouldn't but i cant hear my words
what's happening to my dream world
its falling apart at the seam
cant tell reality from a dream
i fade into nothing
into the pits of insanity

oh wait...it was just a dream
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July 20, 2011 at 4:33 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Rachel. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 19, 2011 at 7:48 PM
i love this piece touching the heart love duncn and ceizar
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