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Dream World

purple sky above fits my dreams like a glove the blue grass blowing from the windy day like the twister in my head swirling around thoughts of dread as they take my innocence away my dream world becomes a nightmare purple skies turn to gray i shouldn't but i cant hear my words what's happening to my dream world its falling apart at the seam cant tell reality from a dream i fade into nothing into the pits of insanity oh wait...it was just a dream

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Date: 7/20/2011 4:33:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Rachel. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:48:00 PM
i love this piece touching the heart love duncn and ceizar
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