Dream World

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Dreams hold secrets That mindful eye ferrets Measuring our reflex response Wherein if love not our sturdy sconce We may contemplate in waking state In slowed down vibrations sedate Employing free will to so erase Pastures where desires graze 22-December-2021

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Jose Vazquez

Date: 12/28/2021 12:07:00 PM

We don´t live in the present because in life we don´t seek what we are... This write to me, is the product of groomed perception. Excellent!!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 12/21/2021 11:11:00 PM

Pastures where desires graze. I take that as poetry desires. Wish I can find some muse not always on love.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/22/2021 3:05:00 AM

It’s literal, Victor. Dreams. Are we aware in our dreams? As an actor within the dream, what’s our response as the dream unfolds? Next, extrapolate to waking state. Moment to moment to moment. How aware are we?