Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Dream World

Dreams hold secrets
That mindful eye ferrets
Measuring our reflex response
Wherein if love not our sturdy sconce
We may contemplate in waking state
In slowed down vibrations sedate
Employing free will to so erase
Pastures where desires graze

22-December-2021

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Jose Vazquez December 28, 2021 at 12:07 PM We don´t live in the present because in life we don´t seek what we are... This write to me, is the product of groomed perception. Excellent!!

Victor Buhagiar December 21, 2021 at 11:11 PM Pastures where desires graze. I take that as poetry desires. Wish I can find some muse not always on love. Unseeking Seeker December 22, 2021 at 3:05 AM It’s literal, Victor. Dreams. Are we aware in our dreams? As an actor within the dream, what’s our response as the dream unfolds? Next, extrapolate to waking state. Moment to moment to moment. How aware are we?