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unrhymed couplets 

Dream Twinkle

Stepping onto the red carpet brushing away clouds silver shining 
blue skies sweet surrender bathes with you beloved angel 
 
Stealing one's breath away your love magically appears rose gold crowned 
a superstar dazzles bathing within the liquid fountain of a soul adorned 

Taking the limelight haunting shadows away warmly beauty invades space held 
crystal clear light shining before the curtains raise applauding heartbeats bounce 

A thousand dreams draped behind a vision portrait hanging on chamber walls 
standing out one alone unique sparkle destiny whistles with the wind 

Victory is found inside peace where the heart sets sunshine rises grace filled 
kissing you softly whispers I close my eyes there you become a beautiful starlight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:45 AM
what a wonderful poem dripping with romance and love - absolutely gorgeous lines my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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