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Dream That Hurt

fun to a falling gun,to a sound of silence that moves on by your tears will fall my blood will crawl upon the darkened floor for the clouds will open for look at the beautiful rain fall i see you holding my hand forever more the nightwalker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 9:42:00 PM
poignantly writen ... I felt I wanted more from this one though ... like its not quite finished ? maybe the story hasnt finished though eh ? lol ... hope you dont mind my observations :) ... love Jayne
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:45:00 PM
Wow! Awesome images, Duncan. I have to remind myself that this is a "dream." It seems so real. Love, Carolyn
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