Dream That Hurt

fun to a falling gun,to a sound of silence
that moves on by

 your tears will fall

my blood will crawl upon the darkened floor
for the clouds will open for look at the beautiful rain fall

i see you holding my hand forever more 



the nightwalker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 9:42 PM
poignantly writen ... I felt I wanted more from this one though ... like its not quite finished ? maybe the story hasnt finished though eh ? lol ... hope you dont mind my observations :) ... love Jayne
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October 10, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Wow! Awesome images, Duncan. I have to remind myself that this is a "dream." It seems so real. Love, Carolyn
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