Dream Part One

sat beneath the cork tree
raven hair ablow
sat a woman i knew not
with a smile set aglow

a single gust of wind 
and petals blew into the sky
she floated through the breeze 
without a single last goodbye

To be continued?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fisher Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 5:52 PM
I like wondering about the mystery. Nice poem.
Komala Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 8:26 PM
hi dear Izzy thank you for sharing your dream...so lovely so heartfelt :) SK
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