William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

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Dream Makers

*Image of Flower Purple Orchids by Pixabay.

Dream Makers

fresh
half-castes
tranced set eyes
moored wild sparkles 
smooched perianths hues
moon chant ripen charm bud

purplish-lacquered functions 
claimed space far and few
*cheat death to thrive
warm broad spots
mauve blooms
dense

*Epiphyte: Plants that grow on another plant but are not parasitic.

2021 August 12

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Eve Roper August 12, 2021 at 8:07 PM Beautiful imagery and fell, William.I like the line, "moon chant charm" . Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula August 12, 2021 at 8:21 PM Eve, you are the epitome of graciousness, -- oh, I got and love the book, of course still reading it but I'll soupmail you later if I don't forget Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2021 at 7:52 PM so this is a merse, huh? I need to check that out. Beautiful imagery and thanks for reading my poetry! William Kelii Kekaula August 12, 2021 at 8:13 PM Andrea, I am grateful, yet I don't know if I gave it any justice, but as for your swapping quatrain -- the pleasure was all mines my friend, Aloha!

Regina Mcintosh August 12, 2021 at 3:42 PM Lovely verse and vision, heavenly, scented with hope. a joy to read and enjoy, God bless you always, Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula August 12, 2021 at 5:02 PM Gina, I'm glad heaven found me, it became easier swapping usual words for unique ones. Your heartfelt words are overwhelming my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit August 12, 2021 at 3:24 PM Enjoyed this beautiful creation, William--lovely colorful images of dream makers. This has to win. William Kelii Kekaula August 12, 2021 at 3:42 PM Ah, Vijay, thoughtful of you my friend, and I am appreciative for the optimism, Aloha!