Dream Makers

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*Image of Flower Purple Orchids by Pixabay. Dream Makers fresh half-castes tranced set eyes moored wild sparkles smooched perianths hues moon chant ripen charm bud purplish-lacquered functions claimed space far and few *cheat death to thrive warm broad spots mauve blooms dense *Epiphyte: Plants that grow on another plant but are not parasitic. 2021 August 12

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2021 8:07:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and fell, William.I like the line, "moon chant charm" . Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 8:21:00 PM

Eve, you are the epitome of graciousness, -- oh, I got and love the book, of course still reading it but I'll soupmail you later if I don't forget Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2021 7:52:00 PM

so this is a merse, huh? I need to check that out. Beautiful imagery and thanks for reading my poetry!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 8:13:00 PM

Andrea, I am grateful, yet I don't know if I gave it any justice, but as for your swapping quatrain -- the pleasure was all mines my friend, Aloha!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/12/2021 3:42:00 PM

Lovely verse and vision, heavenly, scented with hope. a joy to read and enjoy, God bless you always, Love, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 5:02:00 PM

Gina, I'm glad heaven found me, it became easier swapping usual words for unique ones. Your heartfelt words are overwhelming my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2021 3:24:00 PM

Enjoyed this beautiful creation, William--lovely colorful images of dream makers. This has to win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 3:42:00 PM

Ah, Vijay, thoughtful of you my friend, and I am appreciative for the optimism, Aloha!