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dream Love

In my dreams, you're close, so real and near, A love that calls in whispers, soft and clear. But morning light steals you away once more. In my dreams, you're close, so real and near, A fleeting hope, a touch I hold so dear, Yet dawn breaks what night can't restore. In my dreams, you're close, so real and near, A love that calls in whispers, soft and clear. In my dreams, you're close, so real and near, But morning light steals you away once more, A fleeting hope, a touch I hold so dear, Yet dawn breaks what night can't restore, In my dreams, you're close, so real and near, A forever love, close to heart and dear.

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Date: 10/23/2024 11:07:00 AM
Hello Jay, I enjoyed this romantic poem You should read this poem to your wife. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/14/2024 8:55:00 PM
Wow. I did a very similar theme. Mine is not posted yet, but we both focused on lost dream!
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Date: 10/12/2024 2:35:00 AM
this is so well done and so beautiful to sink my heart into Jay, love it
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Date: 10/11/2024 6:49:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic, the triolet form is perfect for this subject. It is enjoyable to read.
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Date: 10/11/2024 1:44:00 PM
What a lovely write. Good dreams or memories are the best kind to have. Great Ending... It is very hard to miss someone that one loves so very deep. Have a wonderful Autumn day  writing away...................
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Date: 10/11/2024 11:55:00 AM
Pretty triolet Jay. Warm sentiments
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