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Dream Girl

When I gaze into her eyes, I see days that we could praise Just the beauty in her face, her smile puts me in a daze In my eyes, she's the best thing walking, honestly and simply And right now I remain hoping that one day we could align like perfect symmetry I remind her each time we interact, on how I wanted her since elementary But now my confidence has rose, I feel now I'm deserving and she could be my Olympic gold But as a man I must admit, that it would hurt me mentally, if she told me she opposed Still my attempts are continuous because I want what's at the end She makes me nervous and happy as I observe every gorgeous bend I admit proudly that she could truly make me melt And forever I'm crushing on her even once I get the positioned yearned As you can now tell, this is no possible form of lust Because I could name many things that I want from her besides to touch It's been growing inside me over the years, a strong urge mixed with mild fear Millions of sweet words, that I wanted to place in her ears I always wanted to express myself, but feared she might not feel the same I know that with the time I've taken, that now is my awaited chance So I must capture her attention before I miss that opportunity Some other guy comes along and takes away the room for me I understand of myself, that different is truly my description Forever young, but now I feel too old to still feel the same about my childhood crush So writing this informative, passionately sweet poem was a must And if it wasn't clear before, I feel this should add that glimmering touch To whom it's designed for, I request nothing more My only wish at this point is that you smile and recognize that it's been you whom I adored By: Quiayren Young

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Date: 9/22/2014 11:23:00 AM
such a sweet tender write - you only get one chance in life - ask her out she may also be too shy - she may say YES:-) Hugs Jan xx
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