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Dream Catcher

When the light of the sun begins to fall Echoes of thoughts begin to ball Drifting into a sleepless state Possibilities grow, at a relentless rate I open my mind, in a wonderland of no validity Emphasized by a walk, through a mirror of fluidity Children's laughter in a sadistic tone This dream is a nightmare, far from home The path I am walking........leads to a house Beyond the door, I wish for my friend, my lover and spouse As the door creaks open a figure is revealed I brace myself, my numbness is my shield A wrinkled hand reaches out from the black It grabs my wrist, leaving no time to fight back As I'm dragged into the darkness, the figure becomes clear The face of my victim, my deepest fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 7:59:00 PM
Thank you for all the messages
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congrats Nathan on your wonderful win in the dream contest with this dynamic delight luv..
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Nathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
Well written Nathan. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:35:00 AM
This is amazing, Nathan. I read the comments before me, you're new in soup. Welcome to the poets heaven, Nathan. And many congrats on your win. Dinda :)
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Nathan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2011 2:19:00 AM
Nathan-there is a contest that is currently going on that I would encourage you to enter with this awesome poem...I believe it is called DREAMS. You have a smooth sense of rhyme and great creativity. May I welcome you with a grand HELLO to a fun and encouraging community. I have only met 1-2 kooks since I started back in January. :) Take Care. Jump in the Soup.
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:39:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry..enjoy the site as u share words with luv...
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