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Once a dream angel appeared in my room Saying he’d come to fly me up to the moon He fixed angel wings to my silken nightgown Came a halo of roses my head for to crown. Taking my hand we flew into the night And we landed on the moon lit up bright Then the two of us lovingly embraced Lovers in the wonder of outer space. We spent happy hours wishing upon stars Catching moonbeams to take home in a jar Went tripping a light fandango moon waltz Doing moonlight cartwheels and somersaults. The dream sadly came to abrupt ending Wishing that it’d be a dream pending I never saw my dream angel again Not even got to know what was his name. I call him my sweet secret dream angel One day I hope so much to be able To dance upon the moon’s face just once more With the dream angel who made my heart soar. “Sadly it was all only make believe.”

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Date: 11/21/2020 10:38:00 AM
Great dream, great wish and very romantic! Would be nice if one could do that!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/21/2020 1:17:00 PM
It certainly would, thank you Krish, I’m most appreciative... Belle
Date: 11/20/2020 1:46:00 PM
Bless. Maybe one day. I love this. Clearly, you are a romantic as I. really enjoyed this. such great visuals. well done.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/20/2020 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Peter, truly most appreciated... Belle
Date: 11/18/2020 5:51:00 PM
Ah, maybe one day you will have an angel of your very own I have enjoyed your sensitive beautiful write, Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/18/2020 11:53:00 PM
We have many angels in our lives, I’ve four beautiful sisters and wonderful friends too. Thank you Pixie... Belle
Date: 11/18/2020 4:40:00 PM
Such a sweet dream in graceful language, Belle!!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/18/2020 4:58:00 PM
Ah, thank you Newton, that’s so kind of you... Belle
Date: 11/18/2020 3:31:00 PM
Did you carry some moonbeams home in a jar?! ... Next time for sure, Belle! Lovely penned, Gershon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/18/2020 3:38:00 PM
Of course I did... Thank you Gershon, Belle
Date: 11/18/2020 10:36:00 AM
At least "make believe" is safe from STDs and COVID-19 ....Aloha! Rico
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/18/2020 11:13:00 AM
Rico, there’s nothing undesirable about sweet dreams, so far as those that I’ve seen... Belle

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