Dream

listening to the crackle of distortion 
my mind a wallowing contortion 
of endless mystery 
grey mass enveloping me
I cant even try to breathe
reaching to pull myself out from under
the deep water I plunder 
but i'm lost within
scraping, breaking my skin
getting colder and colder
grasping my shoulders 
I sigh why am i down here 
i'm not going to drown here 
strength is my retribution 
slowly focused to contribution
hazy emotion, lackluster devotion 
suddenly my inside is fire 
overwhelming desire to escape
Grabbing the edge of the ice 
pulling myself upwards
away from the frozen dark lake
I sit atop a frozen slab 
my heart pounding, ears ringing
shivering I smile, I know i'm safe
I awaken, it was a just a dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 26, 2015 at 5:47 PM
wow, you had me gripped from start to end... a 7...LINDA
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December 26, 2015 at 3:48 PM
a delightful read, Destiny, glad it was just a dream... A gripping one for sure... SKAT
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