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to dream the dream i dream tonight, when beauty visits mid starlight, the cresent moon is still in flight, but Tracie wears a bonnet, not quite.... in the dark of night. thanks Shannon....Don

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Date: 1/8/2012 9:41:00 PM
Very nicely done Don! I would love to have a dream of beauty in a crescent moon...maybe at that!! Beauty to the eye of the beholder! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
The first 3 lines grabbed me then ....well I guess I don't quite get it. lol No worries, often happens to this ole gal.
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:43:00 PM
i don't quite get it either, i just go with the flow?
Date: 1/8/2012 4:26:00 PM
Love this one Don, best wishes Elizabeth
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