Dream

to dream the dream i dream tonight, when beauty visits mid starlight, the cresent moon is still in flight, but Tracie wears a bonnet, not quite.... in the dark of night. thanks Shannon....Don
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Sivey Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Very nicely done Don! I would love to have a dream of beauty in a crescent moon...maybe at that!! Beauty to the eye of the beholder! Great Work!!
Squyres Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 4:40 PM
The first 3 lines grabbed me then ....well I guess I don't quite get it. lol No worries, often happens to this ole gal.
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 4:43 PM
i don't quite get it either, i just go with the flow?
Scholtz Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Love this one Don, best wishes Elizabeth
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