Dream

Dream your dreams come what may. Never let doubts cloud your way. Our subconscious mind, lingers in between. Life's unforgiving reality, and what can't be seen.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/28/2024 6:02:00 PM

Your first two lines are the heart and soul of your message! Good job with this short little rhyme!

John Read
Date: 8/29/2024 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Miranda, my poems get shorter each day, I think age is catching up with me.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/28/2024 9:45:00 AM

Very true brother John. “The star of one's heart seen in dreams, is the star of sleeps silver screen.” One of the quotes I once wrote… Sis Beryl - see your soup mailbox

John Read
Date: 8/28/2024 1:00:00 PM

How true love the quote sister Beryl.