Dream

Will I ever be considered a real person Or will I stay merely a shadow Am I to stay forgotten Or will there be a day of recognition How I would love to be in the open To believe in myself once more Never to be judged again But this will never be but a dream

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/7/2009 4:29:00 AM

Jessica, You can do it. You can believe in yourself once more. No matter how many faults others throw into your face, if they do, just remember that you are a child of God. You are his creation. And He doesn't create junk. Every creature has beauty and a purpose. You do, too. Just seek inside yourself. Before long, the answers will come. You are not fogotten. God loves you. And will help you make your righteouis dreams reality. Embrace hope. Lovingly, Dane

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/6/2009 7:51:00 PM

hi Jessica! fears and thoughts all poets share...I believe we are here to share our love with others, no more, no less, very simple really.... and many ways we all are blessed to give... you have done so by this beautiful verse....Jim

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 6/6/2009 7:42:00 PM

nice.