Dream

Drifting off to sleep
Resting the body and mind
Eyes closed, dreaming deep
After dark, our thoughts unwind
Maybe we're all conscious blind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:08 PM
A lovely, restful piece, Avery! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Won Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you :)
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Hi Avery, Good acrostic on dreams. Exceptional last line. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
Won Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:08 PM
I love to dream, and I found your take on "dream" very interesting, especially that last line. Congrats in my contest, Avery
Won Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Thank you so much!
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