Dream

Drifting off to sleep Resting the body and mind Eyes closed, dreaming deep After dark, our thoughts unwind Maybe we're all conscious blind

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:08:00 PM

A lovely, restful piece, Avery! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Avery Won
Date: 6/9/2021 5:00:00 AM

Thank you :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 1:40:00 PM

Hi Avery, Good acrostic on dreams. Exceptional last line. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Avery Won
Date: 6/7/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:08:00 PM

I love to dream, and I found your take on "dream" very interesting, especially that last line. Congrats in my contest, Avery

Avery Won
Date: 6/7/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you so much!