Dream

DREAM rainbow chimera slithers into heart of darkness - twinkles it like a glow-worm, and steals out “wings to fly fantasies high, yet fades” Sept. 14, 2020 Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2020 2:59:00 PM

this is SO fantastic. Very poetic, Newton!

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/15/2020 4:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2020 5:58:00 AM

- “wings to fly fantasies high, yet fades” ... both beautiful and touching, Newton :) - We must never stop creating new dreams - Best wishes in the contest :) hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/15/2020 6:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment and the wish. Frankly, I didn't have any idea when I was writing this. I simply started and just completed it.