Dream

A dream
unconscious escape
displaying our deepest emotions
illustrations of the soul 
fantasies and nightmares
your own interpretation
a canvas absorbing watercolor cans
fallen from the highest shelf
it begins making sense
and then you wake up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Congrats on your win, Rebecca.
Ligon Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Nice imagery of a canvas absorbing fallen paint. Congrats on your placement!
Campbell  Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:05 AM
thank you so much Juliet :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 9:23 PM
CONGRATS, Rebecca. I especially like those last two lines. Janice
Campbell  Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Thank you, it always seems to just start to make sense and be clear, then you are awakened, sometimes praying to continue the dream for its message.
Gentry Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful word vision poem. Well done!
Campbell  Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:07 AM
thank you Susan!
McBride  Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 4:06 AM
Love it !!
Campbell  Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Thank you.
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