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Drawn To Unknown Spaces

DRAWN TO UNKNOWN SPACES Could there be sight more alluring Than the bending of a lane Or a brow of hill’s contouring Could there be sight more alluring Tied attention thus unmooring Like a lyrical refrain Could there be sight more alluring Than the bending of a lane As the Sun lights distant clearing I am drawn to unknown spaces t’ward the light by pathways veering As the Sun lights distant clearing Always changing ever nearing Viewpoints new or well loved places As the Sun lights distant clearing I am drawn to unknown spaces

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Date: 8/27/2021 12:13:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 8/26/2021 5:14:00 PM
Brilliantly penned triolet, Geoffrey! Bravo! ~ gershon
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Date: 8/16/2021 3:07:00 PM
wow, amazing triolet-ing!!! This one goes to FAVES
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Date: 8/1/2021 11:29:00 PM
Everything here fits together so well, the form, the theme, and the amazing poetry...
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/2/2021 2:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Harry.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:21:00 AM
I liked the awesome rhyme scheme and the imagery of unknown paths and places. Its nice to be curious and adventurous. Kudos for this fab poem!! ^^^^^^^--------------~~~\\~~~~>>>>>> Plz also do read and comment my newest poem
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/28/2021 8:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind response, Zaynab. I have responded in turn.
Date: 7/26/2021 6:32:00 AM
A lovely triolet. I was drawn particularly to the second stanza. Great poetry Geoffrey. Cheers - Gary
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/28/2021 8:12:00 PM
Many thanks, Gary.

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