Geoffrey Brewer Poet Triolet

Drawn To Unknown Spaces

DRAWN TO UNKNOWN SPACES

Could there be sight more alluring
Than the bending of a lane
Or a brow of hill’s contouring
Could there be sight more alluring
Tied attention thus unmooring
Like a lyrical refrain
Could there be sight more alluring
Than the bending of a lane 

As the Sun lights distant clearing
I am drawn to unknown spaces
t’ward the light by pathways veering
As the Sun lights distant clearing
Always changing ever nearing
Viewpoints new or well loved places
As the Sun lights distant clearing
I am drawn to unknown spaces

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Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2021 at 12:13 PM Wonderful!

Gershon Wolf August 26, 2021 at 5:14 PM Brilliantly penned triolet, Geoffrey! Bravo! ~ gershon

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2021 at 3:07 PM wow, amazing triolet-ing!!! This one goes to FAVES

Harry Horsman August 1, 2021 at 11:29 PM Everything here fits together so well, the form, the theme, and the amazing poetry... Geoffrey Brewer August 2, 2021 at 2:04 AM Thank you very much, Harry.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 26, 2021 at 10:21 AM I liked the awesome rhyme scheme and the imagery of unknown paths and places. Its nice to be curious and adventurous. Kudos for this fab poem!! ^^^^^^^--------------~~~\\~~~~>>>>>> Plz also do read and comment my newest poem Geoffrey Brewer July 28, 2021 at 8:13 PM Thank you for your kind response, Zaynab. I have responded in turn.

Gary Radice July 26, 2021 at 6:32 AM A lovely triolet. I was drawn particularly to the second stanza. Great poetry Geoffrey. Cheers - Gary Geoffrey Brewer July 28, 2021 at 8:12 PM Many thanks, Gary.