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Drawn To Unknown Spaces

DRAWN TO UNKNOWN SPACES

Could there be sight more alluring
Than the bending of a lane
Or a brow of hill’s contouring
Could there be sight more alluring
Tied attention thus unmooring
Like a lyrical refrain
Could there be sight more alluring
Than the bending of a lane 

As the Sun lights distant clearing
I am drawn to unknown spaces
t’ward the light by pathways veering
As the Sun lights distant clearing
Always changing ever nearing
Viewpoints new or well loved places
As the Sun lights distant clearing
I am drawn to unknown spaces

Copyright © Geoffrey Brewer | Year Posted 2021

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/27/2021 12:13:00 PM Wonderful! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/26/2021 5:14:00 PM Brilliantly penned triolet, Geoffrey! Bravo! ~ gershon Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2021 3:07:00 PM wow, amazing triolet-ing!!! This one goes to FAVES Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/1/2021 11:29:00 PM Everything here fits together so well, the form, the theme, and the amazing poetry... Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 8/2/2021 2:04:00 AM Thank you very much, Harry.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 7/26/2021 10:21:00 AM I liked the awesome rhyme scheme and the imagery of unknown paths and places. Its nice to be curious and adventurous. Kudos for this fab poem!! ^^^^^^^--------------~~~\\~~~~>>>>>> Plz also do read and comment my newest poem Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 7/28/2021 8:13:00 PM Thank you for your kind response, Zaynab. I have responded in turn.

Gary Radice Date: 7/26/2021 6:32:00 AM A lovely triolet. I was drawn particularly to the second stanza. Great poetry Geoffrey. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 7/28/2021 8:12:00 PM Many thanks, Gary.