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Drawn Into the Most Bizarre Dream

I stood on a shore so pristine and gleaming, and being drawn into the most bizarre dream... everything from imagination to fantasy seemed real, and with arms outstreched I welcomed this sighting. Astonishingly, a new world appeared reflecting the rippled sea below encircled by white clouds swirling around it, not wanting to go... it was of a navy blue without a patch of green as our former planet seemed; instantly, I assumed that all the lovely continents had completely dissapeared. Did I desire to venture myself and live there as an alien from Earth, start a civilization from the bits of knowledge I had gathered from day one? " No change for survival, " I told myself considering loneliness and dearth... then, enlightenment came to me, " It's not impossible...it can be done! " As a loner, drawn into the most bizarre dream, I meditated to achieve my intent: to seek God and ask Him to pull out one of my ribs and create my companion... a kind and giving soulmate, so I wouldn't be taken by fright and wander alone, but share the new creation with the woman who wouldn't be tempted by a serpent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/10/2012 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:27:00 AM
A very interesting take on the subject. Thoroughly enjoyed Andrew.
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:17:00 AM
Andrew congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece xx
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Date: 5/8/2012 9:56:00 AM
Andrew conveying a good message..David
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